Thursday, October 23, 2014

First Dance Comments

Rating: 4.5

Let's take a chance with our first dance.
To wish on a star that our lives will go far.
The music has started, we'll never be parted.
The dance floor is lined with our guests, wined and dined.
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Jeannette Heywood
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Practicing Poetess 27 November 2017

This poem evokes lovely mental pictures, and employs a brilliant rhyme scheme. Thank-you, Jeannette, for such an appealing poem!

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Jeannette Heywood 02 December 2017

Thanks so much PP I do try to create a visual experience with my poetry. Your feedback is most appreciated.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 June 2017

Together forever! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Ernest Makuakua 11 March 2016

NICE POEM FIRST DANCE I knew at a glance, the partner for my first dance. THANKS FOR SHARING

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Jeannette Heywood 12 March 2016

Thank you Ernest.

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Soul Watcher 17 December 2014

These moments will never be forgotten at all. Nice words. thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 November 2014

'I knew at a glance, the partner for my first dance' - So very nice!

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