Monday, February 9, 2009

First Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0


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Katie Holland
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Michael Gale 13 February 2009

Great poem! It was making wanting more stanzas, though, because it was sweet, romantic, and short, but to the point. That first dance, how cute. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 11 February 2009

First dance, instigation of first love.

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Joseph Poewhit 09 February 2009

Very innocent and very real. i could sense the moment - PLUS - back then in the gym.

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