Sunday, April 9, 2023

First Cry, First Question Comments

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First Cry, First Question

The baby's first cry ‘Kuan', 'Kuan"
After falling from mother's womb
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Bharati Nayak
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3) but now I am an old man with all the time at my command. So, I hope could spend time with and for my granddaughter… thank you Bharati.5* and added to MyFavouritePoems

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2) . ….. I had no quality time to spend with her, nor could I earnestly watch and support her growing up. I regret that I missed her growing up years…

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I have a baby granddaughter, just a month old. As a first-time grandfather, I know, I understand what Bharati speaks of in her beautiful poem. When my daughter was a little child, I had no quality time…

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Richard Wlodarski 10 April 2023

The maturing of childhood is so brilliantly reflected in the maturing of your awe-inspiring poetry. Bharati, this is a truly magnificent work of art!

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Nosheen Irfan 10 April 2023

A gem of a piece! Life is full of questions. Children are full of curiosity. A person's journey through life may bring answers or it may add to the questions. A thought provoking piece depicting life through the eyes of a new born. Kudos!

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M. Asim Nehal 10 April 2023

A pleasant journey from the womb to this world, which is merely a mask and a testing ground. How skillfully you came up with the concept and turned it into a beautiful poem. Full *****Full *****

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