First Class. Comments

dear john did'nt I write that ah ah, brilliant understood word the message is quite clear terry read 'the pen' and, conned

Excellent distinction between rich and poor and the elusive longing for hope to heal the in-balance of class. The struggle for riches and prestige has not evoked happiness and material greed has put a full stop to this. The rhyming couplet at the conclusion rounds off the philosophy of greed and the rhyme throughout works well with the flow of the poem. Well done! 10 love Karin