Saturday, December 20, 2008

First Beautiful Rain Comments

Rating: 4.9

I could see from the window
Light losing it's consciousness
With fading sunshine.
The green cheering rhythmically
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Sameer Ahmed
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Ms Presumptuous 22 December 2019

I Am happy for sulaiman, sameer and andalib, all 3 in 1.

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Matt Mooney 06 August 2009

What a complete and beautiful poem! Happy to read you. Keep in touch.

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Deepti Agarwal 10 July 2009

sweet write... refreshing just like rain.... :)

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 07 July 2009

Eloquent, soothing, and refreshing like the rain. Very nice Sameer.

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Cathryn Adeli 24 June 2009

i very much enjoyed this poem. thank you for inviting me to read it and comment. since you did and since there are so few that are as well written as this and that a few simple things i feel would make it even more lovely, i take the permission to say, eliminate 'like' in poetry use the words to say what it is or is not, try to use as few 'THE' 'a' 'and' as possible and still keep the meaning and rythm i would have written, eagerly awaiting freedom from dirt! ' i invite you to read and comment on my new powm i ran. thank you again. good luck,

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 June 2009

Very lovely poem.

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Jack Price 10 June 2009

I found this wonderful nature poem on your list. It is so beautiful. I will review and enjoy more of your work as time permits.... J.L.

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Meghan Foubare 09 June 2009

This poem about rain makes me feel cleam on the inside. Just a beautiful rythm about the whole entire thing.

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Shiza Khan 08 June 2009

Beautiful poem.. i can imagine whtever u have written!

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Shiza Khan 08 June 2009

Beautiful poem.. i can imagine whtever u have written!

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Bob Blackwell 06 June 2009

Lovely poem, rain brings us water the very essence of life.

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Yelena M. 27 April 2009

A beautiful poem, Sameer, combines so well with rain I am observing right now from the window.Very well crafted.Thank you.10+ Best wishes. A.

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nomad omnia 20 March 2009

Excellent - I'm sitting here in 30+ celcius, and would really welcome that 'first rain'. N

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Peya Jakob 19 March 2009

You are a great writer and this is evidence.the connection is strong throughout.thanks for sharing. Peya

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Rosalita Fernandez 15 March 2009

Well written, you can actually imagine it happening, i actually like the rain so i like this alot!

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Soumia Benmechiche 14 March 2009

Nice poem well done(a ten) I liked it so much, if you can read my poems

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Bubble Rao 11 March 2009

I love this imagry Its lovely

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Ana Zaldivar 19 January 2009

a very touching poem... it brings peace to the heart.. well done! ten for this!

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Janri Gogeshvili 18 January 2009

Figuratively also it is melodious/10

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Bob Gibson 18 January 2009

Poeticaly versed! well done!

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