Tuesday, July 13, 2010

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I`m sorry my friend for being so sharp with you,
You see there is a hole in my heart,
I gave my self to one [so young]
See i was 21,
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jayne carpenter
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Dr.subhendu Kar 13 July 2010

story of green reels of love yet it intones with sadness heart remembers parting soul lone silence as when swoons glow, quite passionate and poignant too, heartfelt,10+, thanks for sharing

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