Tuesday, May 6, 2014

First Aid (From A Modern Day Florence Nightingale) Comments

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I wish there was a state-of-the-art hospital
All sterile and overstaffed
Surgeons with stethoscope ears
To hear the pulse of the troubled poets
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Susan Lacovara
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Darlene Walsh 09 May 2014

Your poem is so very true, so many people suffer from within, and it can be seen in many people's art. When I was young I was one of the tortured souls, and it has inspired much of my writing. The theme song of M*A*S*H (the movie) was my song for a few years. Life is wonderful now, and my medic is my fiance and my curing medicine are his soothing hugs.

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Juan Olivarez 07 May 2014

Alan Alda and McClain Stevenson immediately came to mind. Hawkeye and Trapper John. Wonderful poem.

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Susan Lacovara

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