Thursday, January 17, 2013

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The field I was lying in felt like the vertical surface of a cliff
I swore I could see the stars moving from where I lay
It was infinitesimal, but it was there
I tried to synchronize my breathing with the rushing of the wind over me
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Elizabeth Shield
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Adeline Foster 07 February 2013

Sounds something like Edna Millay's 'Renascence'. very good. Read mine - Memory is a Cheating Thing - Adeline

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