Wednesday, July 2, 2008

Firey Desire Comments

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Oh how she holds it in
The firey desire
She longs to lock her lips with her hidden dream boy
Yet she is so young
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Bella Ravenstar
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Viola Grey 02 July 2008

I have to disagree with Fahim...I love that you didn't abuse a thousand words to speak from the heart...nice work

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Fahim Sayed 02 July 2008

Hey.....Nellie if this poem is about you then i suggest that you be more expressive with your words and probably ask him to read out... Fahim

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