Friday, July 29, 2016

Fireworks (Haiku) Comments

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this part of the park
where no sunlight trespasses
a swarm of fireflies
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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Mike Cohen 29 July 2016

they are a very pretty sight especially in the twilight. Very nice Haiku.

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indeed it was. Thank you very much!

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Paola Gianotti 29 July 2016

well articulated. it must have been truly special to have witnessed.

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thank you Paola, It was very beautiful to see them

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Gil Highlander 29 July 2016

vivid photograph caught through the lens of a haiku. well done!

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I wish I had taken a photo of the fireflies!

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Kelly Kurt 29 July 2016

Are they active in the day because of the dense shade? I have never seen that, it sounds cool. I love July and August here in Illinois because after sunset, they are so numerous and active

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no they tend to be much more active as the sun sets. But this part of the park is dark so you tend to see them very well. It looks like fireworks

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Stephen Park 29 July 2016

another of life's moments well captured.

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this is what makes haiku fun!

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Guru Kothandaraman 29 July 2016

that must have lit up the park. beautiful haiku.

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thank you sir

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M Asim Nehal 29 July 2016

Nice one with good imagery.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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