Thursday, March 17, 2016

Fireworks Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a colorful flower of your fireworks,
What a fire worker you are sweetheart!
A mortal tube with filled in explosives,
Sleeping on a shelf like a work of art.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2019

With the muse of a colourful flower. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 February 2019

And when you ignite like a naughty child, I scatter some light in the dark universe...........I enormously relish the beauty of poetic expression! A lovely work...10

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Very nice sir, nice to read sir

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Loke Kok Yee 20 March 2016

you have turned a fireworks display into a lovely poem. thank you sir

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Khalid Saifullah 17 March 2016

A wonderful poem of amazing thoughts.

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