Thursday, August 1, 2013

Fireworks Comments

Rating: 3.5

In the gloominess of night
Hearts shivered continuously
Like magnets they pulled together quickly
In a car park filled of cars
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Jemima Rivas
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Kanav Justa 21 March 2014

...I guess all who likes fireworks should decline For all they leave is rubbish behind , , , ' nice and meaningful lines, , ,

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Jemima Rivas 23 December 2013

thank you :)

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Rishabh Bidya 22 December 2013

Wow! ! Great work indeed! ! : D

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Jemima Rivas 26 April 2015

thank you

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 06 August 2013

good poem for good though thanks for sharing

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Dave Walker 01 August 2013

A great poem, fireworks of life can fizzle out, but sometimes they can last forever.

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