Sunday, October 21, 2012

Fireworks Comments

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Spent fireworks, dribbling in the dark sky,
Sharp lines and specks of light melting, fading,
Washing away with a faint cracking sound
While the accommodating audience
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William B. Deutscher
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William Jackson 21 October 2012

I really like the simile expressed at the end. Fine write!

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