Fireworks. Comments

I love the words you have used to describe the fireworks it sounds very magical and you have brought the poem to life.

You have shown a wonderful picture of fireworks. Beautiful!

this poem is a well penned that kept me reading this for more than once. fireworks had been written in a beautiful way by this poem. nice

The poem is very well written and depicts good images of fireworks...10/10 Best Wishes Naseer

John you have used considerable poetic skill with this verse... both the flow and the composition are just right - - the metaphors employed are impressive too.... well done 10 Fay

your fireworks just so brilliant with colors of your words 10

Impeccable rhythm and rhyme and your words paint beautiful pictures. I too, noticed the great alliteration. 10 love Karin

Good alliteration and terse. I enjoy fireworks too.