Wednesday, July 4, 2007
Fireworks Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Colorful sparks bursts
Traveling across the sky
People look and are amazed
They want more to brighten up the sky
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♥ Loved Sunshine Princess♥
04 July 2007
This truely discribes fireworks. Awesome Job Holly! ! ! ! ! Sun ♥
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7/23/2025 10:56:19 AM # 1.0.0
I give you a ten for 'Fireworks'. Well said! Suggestions: Change 'bursts' to burst. Add a comma after burst and add a period after 'sky' in both place. Add a comma after cloud. Change sunsets to sunset's. Add a period at the very end after any day.