Thursday, June 9, 2022

Firestorm Comments

Rating: 5.0

Firestorm

You design triangles with my hands
Throw fire on my sand
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Amber Piercy
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Ruslan Kerimov 08 July 2024

Great one! Enjoyed it

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Amber Piercy 13 June 2022

Thank you guys so much i appreciate the support.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 June 2022

Beautifully written

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" To die with every kiss / Is like thrusting upon a knife"… beautiful poetry… the pangs of love captured in their full intensity and fullness.

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A great feeling of love and intensity of a come-back.. nice.

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Amber Piercy 11 July 2022

I am so glad that you like my poem thank you so much for the comments and support. Have a great day.

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