In the fires of our dreams,
we burn our desires away.
Among the ashes that we scatter
old and distant loves lay.
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This is a well structured poem with the first and last stanzas providing a rather neat pair of poetic bookends to hold your words. I enjoy your theme of emotional spring cleaning. Something that we should all embark on at least once a year. Wise and well chosen words. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
And then there are times when we can't forget the dream or the passion or the face that once was dear. Awesome write David.
Gosh David! I think you must have swallowed a magical poetry pill as I think your dreams have all taken off like this poem! Once again such amazing insight and depth to your work. 10 Karin Anderson
Dreams are what keep our emotions alive. A fiery poem with fine rhythm, thanks for sharing, David, glad to have discovered your poetry. Y.M.