Thursday, December 5, 2013

Firelight Comments

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I see fire, burning my hills,
My desire, and heart stills.

Brought to my knees, from the things I've done,
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Andrew Hinton
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 December 2013

A fiery fantastic spark of emotions poem. I was overawed by your rhymin technique. So smart poet pleez do atempt answerin my riddles poem.

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Far Lapenna 05 December 2013

I can feel emotions rolling off this poem like sparks from a flame - beautiful poetry it expresses your strength very well.

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Andrew Hinton

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