Thursday, September 10, 2009

Firefly Love Bug Comments

Rating: 5.0

the firefly which is a beetle
leaves my heart torn and feeble.

it came into my life with its bright light.
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louis rams
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Kranthi Pothineni 15 September 2009

Very well kept message. Nice to read.

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Matt Mooney 14 September 2009

The light of love leading you on to prayer in the chapel. 'Lead on kindly light'.

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Deborah Cromer 12 September 2009

Interesting and it tells a little story. It is different, but still writes of what is always the same! Always the search and hardships of finding your match. One heart looking for another. Two hearts to be together forever. You have written this out in a different kinda way. DC

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Shashendra Amalshan 12 September 2009

Hey something different indeed! ! ! very creative piece of work.. Nicely done.. Hey lovely title too... enjoyed this one very much.. good.. 10++ hey I couldn't respond to all your invitations, kinda busy last few days.. when I am free I will read them.. cheers Shan

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