Tuesday, February 19, 2019

Firefly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh you precious firefly,
Holding yourself in low esteem
Your light is flashing the loveliest glow,
With a spell of lemon green
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Bill Cantrell
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Rebecca Navarre 11 March 2019

And awesome picture too! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 11 March 2019

Absolutely beautifully! .. Breathtakingly sewn! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ........................+++++

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Bill Cantrell 11 March 2019

Thank you Rebecca, you are so kind to read and comment, thank you!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 February 2019

Oh majestic creature of the night Love comes with kisses, Not with fights....what a brilliant poetic expression! Loved reading this fabulous poem.....10

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Bill cantrell 20 February 2019

Thank you my friend Dillip, I really appreciate your opinions on my poetry

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 February 2019

Beautiful piece, and well-crafted. Shut not your eyes, Less tears be shed... I wonder if you mean 'Lest tears be shed'. Or may be I don't see what the poet sees.

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Bill Cantrell 20 February 2019

Thank you for your kind comment, and thank you for bringing typo to my attention, I really appreciate that my friend

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 February 2019

A wonderful poem with a meaningful message. " Love comes with kisses, not with fights. Save your light for the perfect one. Truth has nothing to hide." Beautiful lines from a well crafted write. And so very true.

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Bill Cantrell 20 February 2019

Thank you Rose Marie, so many times we hear the words...just be yourself

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Sandra Feldman 19 February 2019

Poem nice and poem bright Enhances beauty, hope and flight. Really, a spiritual lift! Thank you.

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Bill cantrell 20 February 2019

Thank you Sandra, so many times people look for love in the wrong place at the wrong time, having raised three girls I wish I had written this poem long ago, I would’ve read it to them every night at bedtime

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