Fireflies Of Laughter Comments

what even is this? ? ? ?

the last line is unexpected, I love how it contrasts the mood of the other two lines. grandness.

Loved this..great write all the very best Jon

Ah, brilliant! I love this! Short with a big punch

I know you’re intrigued I can see it in your eye You’re trying to figure out How to catch this firefly :)

A thought provoking idea expressed with the brilliance of brevity should always be commended. Well done.

incredible.............

wow...that is just amazing...for me, it signifies the desire to be happy and not alone....beautiful imagery...

Wha' did ya say? .... I need a band-aid

Rehan, good work! Use the present tense & delet articles? chasing after the fireflies of fading laughter ears bleed

Rehan, good work! Use the present tense & delet articles? chasing after the fireflies of fading laughter ears bleed