Fireflies (Monoku) Comments

Awesome monoku. Like the way you put it.

Bioluminescence is a beacon-fruit of the Creation's aesthetic intent. (At least I hope so!) It glows at the threshold of sight, thus reminding us of vision's eagerness to see. Passing in a moment, it reminds us that awareness is transient.

Lovely! Isn't it wonderful we can do that.

Sometimes when you read a poem or hear a song, there is something in them that make you say this is it! .Well that'exactly what happened when I read this monoku.Splendid!

Beautiful! Nature gives us all instinctive guidance to find our way.

A short witty write. Nicely penned.