Sunday, November 6, 2016

Fireflies In The Night Comments

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They waft and burn
Spreading wings by night
And by day disappear
Like flickering dreams
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Tapera Makadho
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Pamela Sinicrope 03 March 2017

I love that line, 'Beguiled by the wings and false swings.' I see this poem as a metaphor for the counterfeit. You think there is light there...but if you look closer it doesn't burn and it disappears... Well done.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 November 2016

Daytime! ! They vanish into nothingness. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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