Thursday, August 13, 2009

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she dropped glass full of water
a dropp in her left eye
a dropp of blood from her right foot
which got injured
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
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Vaibhav Pandey 27 August 2009

a harrowing poem kamran sir....hit me deep...10

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Indira Babbellapati 27 August 2009

ha, yet another fuedal intrigue...

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Seema Aarella 21 August 2009

The dark side of life in the regal manors....well exposed in a sensitive write!

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Rehana Nazli 17 August 2009

it is sad story. you expose the ugly side of so called people with positions of powers. thanks for wrting this.

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Oh Dear! The blood, the broken glass and tears. I know this could be a true story, and this used to happen in years gone by. You have captured it all brilliantly and leaving the mansion of dignity with heavy feet with a souvenir in her tummy. A very unique poem....10 love Karin

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