Wednesday, February 2, 2005

Fire Works Comments

Rating: 3.6

Whizzing and banging
The Fire Roars
All the people come out...of there little doors
They watch the fountains much ablaze
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Jamie Parker
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Sean De Montfort 14 October 2005

Hmmm....a OK poem but not great

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