Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, February 28, 2010

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Oh, my dear of dearest
I considered you close and nearest?
Will you forget me ever and deceive?
Will your heart not respond to me and receive?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Desiree Cash 16 March 2010

Wonderful description, I am very fond of this one. Though it is sad, it is still lovely. (: Thank you for sharing.

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Brenda Arroyo 11 March 2010

It's beautful. sad but lovely. and your rhyme was great!

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Kahara Tessia 03 March 2010

very good gives good images

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*~*happily desturbed*~* ? 28 February 2010

i like it.. :) its very good. keep writing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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