Fire Starter Comments

another masterpiece of your emotional supplication. keep using your gift and take full advantage of it. it will be not only your release but it will be your guide. another well deserved 10, my friend Jen

You relate to people so much in this poem awesome poem

I'm digging this poem man! I definetely relate to this poem. I understand where you're coming from because this poem represents my daily struggle. Keep writting, you definetely got talent.

i love it. the loss of hope and defeat in the beginning, but the strength to go on twords the end. a very powerful piece. keep up the GREAT work!

It's like a man is trying to relive his glory days as a child because death or a cancer has been creeping upon making him feel trapped. So he starts doing things shamelessly feeling there's no other way to live. Compelling.

I liked this poem as well. You're a great writer

i love this poem keep writing

wow.! ! ! ! ! ! ! written with such passion. really. you should keep this up. It was so deep, i felt it.: -)

Wat a well written poem..i luv it...keep posting<33

This poem is really deep. Again I can totally relate. Great job

you are extremely passionate, your work is honestly a joy to read, I know that sounds REALLY structured, but it is definantly beautiful.

You do write well! ! Enjoyed the emotion in this one

Questions like you ask here Keith are so needed to make a relationship lasting..... you write well...... and 10 from Fay...

Very good piece. I especially like the end.

Youth is always wasted on the young. It's best to always be young at heart. Good job!

I really like this one a lot... no i love this one! ! ! Its just simply beautiful!

Very well thought out poem....... expresses both sides of your emotions. I love how it essentially tells a story!

really deep, the ending is very well expressed

The capital letters and exclamations are effective. The internal rhymes work well (brain and strain, extinguished and relinquished, fire, desire and tired) . The words that I naturally stress while reading this are: “strain, burns, seep, ”. Good work.

i like how you end the piece with a sense of hope...very powerful