Fire Painting With Water Comments

Beautiful expression of words in the nice poem.

Beautiful touch as much as this gracious title too_Soul

In the last two stanzas, the poet takes the readers to the realm of fancy and beauty. Beautiful expression!

Tiresome colors stagger on our paths painting, a flamingo feather i render to myth, confirm, if in sight of time is this coldplay, it 'll remember as never ever forever more! ... great lines...

I have been away for just a few weeks and the lady is still as mature as she was, this is really a purely matured write, one that teachs a snail how to fly, Now my blisters have conquered your warmth My grooves fathomed into your fire As you swerve along in airs, i swirl, In your arms, now i see, time to crawl, Super! The_African_Son

u have greatest of ideas to write upon...........another masterpiece

beautiful just beautiful...it is incredible how your thoughts flow in this poem it is just like a melody and i am bewitched.....i loved it thank you for sharing love, payal

Your imagination is here immaculate and bereft of superfluous connotations. The poem excels as a piece of true literary gem scintillating the rays of diction and thoughts.

I loved the beginning line to this poem, Not from sky, from the heart of nature. Good intro, excellent poem.