Fire On Your Finger Comments

Ellen talked about this poem just now in our lessons and we didn't believe her, but now, we're so touched about this poem that we think about making our next topic

i like your poem but you should do some bits that dont ryme and maybe start a line without fire.well done

I like how fire begins each line, its a nice poem, maybe a little work could make it sound more sofisticated but other than that its lovely.9

very awsome -Brie