Saturday, July 24, 2010

Fire Of The Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

I looked into the fire of the night…
Flames burning bright, illuminating the darkness…
I looked into your eyes….
Reflections of the open flame…
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Kevin Carney
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Good metaphor ang imagery here. Has a mystical appeal, captures the reader. Well done! ; D

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