Fire Of Love. Comments
I would give you the universe and all its swirls of mystery,
capture up the planets and all that vast majestic beauty,
but they are nothing i can afford, being a poor man, me,
instead all i can give is my battered and bloody heart of love,
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Hey, i think the last line should be 'I would be....' not 'will', seeing as it would only happen if she did leave u.................anyway, this is an amazing poem otherwise :)
Awesome and deep stuff, Phil. What a lucky girl- you wouldn't need to get her all the stars and planets she'd have you! Keep up the good work- I'm luvvin it! Luv ya, :) xXxXx
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7/23/2025 8:53:02 PM # 1.0.0
lovely phil...this is really good...keep it up