Saturday, October 13, 2007

Fire & Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Golden orangish flames
Hinted with a hue of blue
Circling round hardened wood
Consuming the outer
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Patricia Gale
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A very deep poem with excellent imagery. You use colors to give brighter pictures to the reader and it certainly worked for me. Excellent! Karin Anderson

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Nimal Dunuhinga 24 October 2007

Very deep Patricia and yes, both give burning sensation?

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Meggie Gultiano 13 October 2007

lovely piece Pat..but this is very deep..thanks for this hugs, Meggie

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 13 October 2007

But what a lovely way to burn...10

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Theodora Onken 13 October 2007

This is very deep and profound! Awesome and thought provoking, Patricia. Theo

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