Fire Inside Comments

This poem has alot of depth, I enjoyed reading it very much. :)

Many may not know the depth of this great poem.To find light and ignite it once again as it was meant to be, is to find love and universal unity to help heal this damaged world...Great poem

it reminds me of my lines 'What we need melts us and what we get freezes us and in this process time molds us soo well.' keep writing darren grrt work....

Fire inside.. written with soo much curiosity...n what you once believe is in question grtttt.... a true human experience....'until their new being starts to solidify they once again became hardened..' sooo thoughtful and real...

abstract lines that invite the reader to deep thought..very well conceived poem....

Very good poem, the core is true and I really enjoyed the message.

I've had experiences recently that relate to what you were saying in your poem although to be honest I have experiences like that everyday. It's great to read a poem I can finally relate to! I just have one question for you-I doon't know if you've ever taken drugs but do you think if your mind can reach a level that you wouldn't normally experience and you have a revelation-would you say it was false? Because I wonder, if you can remember it later (when sober) and you follow a path or belief-maybe about yourself or your life style due to the idea you have while intoxicated-does it count as a real truth or would you consider it false? I'd be interested to hear your opinion!