Fire In The Bosom Comments

very interesting poem greatly penned ..... My death is an extra judicial killing. I cannot decide who is guilty of the sins! ....... vote//10++++++++++++++++++++++

These are thoughts that plague ordinary mortals like us! If we are pushed down once more to the Earth after our death, it would have been nice, but if the Earth by then becomes a burning sphere of gases, it would be terrible! However you have given deep thought over the subject and poem makes an interesting read!

A thought provoking poem. Loved the title. It draws a reader to go on with this write. Very perceptive piece of work.10++++

FIRE AND BOSOM SIR JA is very lengthy though IF YOU ALL SAY WE ARE SOULS AND PART OF GOD then why worry the soul will attach itself to the BIGGEST SOUL and no god is going to punish himself he has 7.5 billions there were only two in the GARDEN OF EDEN He must be wearing out also and thinning parting with parts of his soul or he is wholly whole sole

Start your return journey without any senses just with thinking, the immortal thinking, that was dormant when you were committing a sin. On way you'll see many earths green and colorful, ...Earth and the fire in its bosom....... earth was once a burning planet... we have forgotten it almost............ in Heaven is their time and the concept of space? ? all a mystery. for us poets it is a joy and a riddle to remain in this mystery.. thank u dear Akhtar. tony

And who will try the judge for his crimes?

As desired you'll be tried on the earth once again. Earth that could never cool down the fire in its bosom! ............so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem shared amazingly.10