Saturday, December 1, 2012

Fire In My Head Comments

Rating: ★5.0

My thought cloud up
Like pools of smoke
Oops I'm sorry
My mentalstability just broke
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Midnight Lily
fire sorry
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A Dark Lifetime . 02 December 2012

Wow: O You are really good dear! ! You write with so strong words and so much feelings that you actually numb the reader. And that is amazing!

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Hazel Durham 02 December 2012

Confusion and a fear of the intensity of life, great imagery and lovely flow! Amazing write for your age, well done!

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