Thursday, September 1, 2011

Fire In Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

You put the fire in my soul,
And put my pen to this scroll.
With the fire of a thousand hearts,
The immense feelings start.
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Adam Iron Thorn
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Stefanie Fontker 01 September 2011

Interesting rhyming scheme. Rhyming poems aren't my favourites, but this is very beautiful. I like your writing, and I hope to see more from you in the future.

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