Thursday, September 24, 2015

Fire Hydrants Comments

Rating: 5.0

You find them on curbs
And crewcut turfs
Their Squat, placid bodies
Hallowed with punctual geometry,
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Kevin Patrick
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Mj Lemon 07 October 2015

The fire hydrant as guardian... This is brilliant. Yours is a poem that's a great homage to the humble structure, and a reminder that what's around us is worthy of more than a passing acknowledgement. A 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2015

So nicely envisioned and aptly depicted. Wonderful expression. Thanks for sharing. .....10

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Kelly Kurt 24 September 2015

They will stand as stainless steles Great stuff, Kevin. Thanks for sharing

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Terry Craddock 24 September 2015

best 'Fire Hydrants' poem I have ever read, extremely well written, an adventure to read, accurate in geometric and emotive detail, metaphors like 'As when the dogs did their worshiping/ And left lemonade of the eucharis', with such wonderful insightful flow; hope your not peed off I mentioned this, for me this added extra depths of meaning, wonderful

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