Thursday, June 7, 2018

Fire From Potholes Comments

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Walking on the road full of dirt,
This is painful to see edges,
Stones bulging out with pride,
These defame the potholes within,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Edward Kofi Louis 11 June 2018

Avoiding negatnegative energy! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Hans Vr 09 June 2018

Wonderful reflection, starting with the physical danger, moving through very rich thoughts. Very poetic. I love it

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Akhtar Jawad 08 June 2018

You are self luminous point of light, Eternity is your identity Great message for we all.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 June 2018

Avoiding negative energy waves/You can easily chant God's name/Empowering mind with devotion, Bearing wisdom of eternity/You can proceed with courage….So pious so devotional…touching expression! I profoundly admire the great message embodied in this beautiful poem! Thanks dear sir for sharing…10

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Valsa George 08 June 2018

You are fire of potholes to ignite self, You are self luminous point of light, Eternity is your identity, God is father, ................................. Lovely lines! Love the depth of this poem! A huge 10

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Kelly Kurt 07 June 2018

A wonderful photo, and inspirational verse.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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