Walking on the road full of dirt,
This is painful to see edges,
Stones bulging out with pride,
These defame the potholes within,
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Wonderful reflection, starting with the physical danger, moving through very rich thoughts. Very poetic. I love it
You are self luminous point of light, Eternity is your identity Great message for we all.
Avoiding negative energy waves/You can easily chant God's name/Empowering mind with devotion, Bearing wisdom of eternity/You can proceed with courage….So pious so devotional…touching expression! I profoundly admire the great message embodied in this beautiful poem! Thanks dear sir for sharing…10
You are fire of potholes to ignite self, You are self luminous point of light, Eternity is your identity, God is father, ................................. Lovely lines! Love the depth of this poem! A huge 10
Avoiding negatnegative energy! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.