Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Fire-Flies Comments

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The uncommon venations of somebody unknown
Shone in the dark,
As if the moon turned into the bright sun.
It started to wander, started to rave,
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Saheb Mohapatra
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Dr Pintu Mahakul 24 October 2014

In dark fire flies to greet tiny heat with wonderful imagination. Very nicely penned this poem is.

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 October 2014

Beautiful write with quiet Interesting lines... The waves too saluted, mountains too bowed To greet the tiny fire without heat, But periodically showing its greatest feat. Loved the way fire flies glowing....

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 October 2014

Phenomenal write with beautiful words.............very nice

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Saheb Mohapatra

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