Saturday, August 10, 2013

Fire Flies Comments

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Those fireflies around the lantern...
They know their fate.
yet, they are in haste
to burn and waste
...
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Halsho Zangana
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Aria Siren 17 September 2013

I never looked at fire flies in that way before. Excellent poem and beautiful metaphors!

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Asal Banu 13 August 2013

i like it so much :)

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Unwritten Soul 11 August 2013

Wow i gonna say fireflies are one of my fav things to watch as it always inspiring me, and second i like the way you present the idea in very delicate thought here! _Soul

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Halsho Zangana 10 August 2013

Thank you for your words Dear, indeed it is.

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Payal Parande 10 August 2013

poets are like fire flies they usher light from their provoking thoughts to illuminate the peoples life with good change and love....a brilliant poem sir

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