Fire, Fire, Fire! Comments

Great poem this poem was pretty cosmic and Godly.

Dichotomic attributes of fire well portrayed… Its we responsible to [mis]use it …but fire is indifferent… Positives are more than negatives …we’ve to strive to enkindle our inner self …misuse will be cordoned… 10 Ms Nivedita UK

a fine poetic explanation! nice wording! 10+

Lustrous existence gone, All in darkness, inky black Empty space, serenity, tranquility but then, The essence is nothing without - Fire! Fire! Fire! its mainaesence is fir e and power andnothing comes without fire....10 beautiful write i liked dit read mine no violence... forgiveness and step mother

you painted a picture of fire in two ways, good and bad. on one hand, fire provides warmth and is productive to life, on the other hand it provides harm and is destructive to life. whichever way, it plays an important role in our lives.

Wonderful poem.

u write very vividly and so eloquently

I totally agree. Though outbreaks are plentiful and disastrous, we wouldn't be as evolved without it or even as happy and content without it. Great read. ~Shyana K~<3

I agree with you, Horlanda, fire is one of the main |elements|,10

Fire brings life but when it outbreaks it destroys vegetation, animals, humanbeings, everything which comes in its way but the essence is, as you said, nothing without fire. A good meaningful poem........10/10. Regards Naseer