Sunday, December 11, 2005

Fire (Another One Out Of The Door) Comments

Rating: 3.3

I lighte a fire.
It goes out in 2 hours,
I wake up next morning to find It ablaze
This fire/our love i compare:
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Nathan Pigott
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Ivanna Kissyou 18 March 2007

this pains me. watch you're spelling. Release you're inebitions.

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Nick Hilton 20 December 2005

'This fire/our love' Why are you using a slash inside the poem? And to be honest i can't imagine you having any nights of burning passion. Nick

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