Saturday, September 15, 2012

Fire And Ice Comments

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Fire and ice, fire and ice,
Fire and ice, they will suffice.
With the huge flames glowing, glowing
And the glaciers overflowing.
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George Hunter
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George F. Hunter 27 May 2013

No rhyme as off is in the middle of a split sentence.

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Just a question... where's the rhyme for 'off'? ? ?

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Words' Knight 26 September 2012

nice piece of writting and job and well expressed thought. thank you for sharing ywith us your poems.

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Eindaray Kyaw 16 September 2012

great an enchanting harmony adds to my delight and also the meaning....are really worthy.. Great job!

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