Monday, September 8, 2008

Fire And Dark Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fire and dark, circling the sky
Fighting all night, unwilling to die
Crushing darkness
Burning flames
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Timothy Weiermann
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this poem is cool... nice.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 20 January 2009

I see the fire as same as the darkness well in your poem, thanks Timothy.

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Anjali Sinha 25 October 2008

'A phoenix's fury A demon's wrath' hey my lil fren u learning to swear haaaan ++++10 love anju

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 September 2008

'Darkness will pass, Flames will grow Destroying all in the way Nothing will last' Very nice.

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Timothy Weiermann

Timothy Weiermann

Tucson, Arizona
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