Monday, January 12, 2009

Fire Comments

Rating: 4.0

Burn,
Burn brightly,
Oh such delight,
This fire brings me,
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Demon Elwin
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Catrina Heart 17 January 2009

a poem written with so much energy and emotion....great write.10

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Katherine A. Cheng 12 January 2009

It's a sensational poem, but you seriously need to fix your grammar. No offense intended, of course. The poem itself is amazing.

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