Tuesday, March 7, 2006

Fire Comments

Rating: 2.3

I’m sitting
Staring
Why am I so dazed
Why can’t
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Jake Gassiot
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Joan Zu 02 June 2006

this poem makes me feel as if i am swaying back and forth while being engulfed in a hatred covering me with scales and a fog, a heavy blanket. i think your poem is well writen but maybe for a moment you should step out of your anger.

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Jake Gassiot

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