Friday, March 3, 2006

Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

The white hot pain of emptiness
that burns so deep within
The vortex of ever growing lonliness
crawling across the skin.
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Penni Currie
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Mary Naylor 03 March 2006

You describe feelings with with great intensity. Vivid imagery. A well-crafted poem!

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