Fire Comments

at the bottom the rebellious utterance! great

Powerful visual imagery brought out through great diction. I applaud you fellow poet

Powerful visual imagery brought out through great diction. I applaud you fellow poet!

p.s. meena, you remind me in your writing of poet naomi shihob nye. if you don't already know her, i think you'll like her. -gk

Meena, if you read this, first I want to say I’m impressed with your writing craft, the vividness of your images—Dry thatches (conspirators-in-crime) and Reverberate and sound as loud as snail shells crackling under nailed boots—most stand out to me. Your passion, intensity, permeate this poem. Good stuff! -Glen Kappy

A sad reality indeed of the present time. Nicely done. Congrats.

Brilliant depiction, congratulations.

Congratulations, yes the reporters collect news only.....to make their companies rich and the fire does its work.... Irony.... Nice piece.

Congratulations, yes the reporters collect news only.....to make their companies rich and the fire does its work.... Irony.... Nice piece.

The furnace of Satanic cruelty as the today's reality being depicted brilliantly...........outstanding piece......... thanks for sharing

Meena, such a brilliant write... congrats for being chosen...10+++

What a fierce imagery that evokes anger. I am touched and sad. Expertly penned.

Horrors of a frightening inferno where everything is charred before help could reach. This is really heart wrenching. Thanks.

Black satanic fumes! ! With the wickedness of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Oh my! brings me a nostalgia of a past..a dharmapuri../ kizvenmani..or kizvenil..] Thanks for this poem, which brings me my ire.at height.. Opened mouth curses .... why all is at fraught, never reaches those..?