Thursday, January 28, 2010

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the way you touch me it leaves a burn
that only makes me want more! to yearn
the feel of you when your beside me
and for once i don't care if this isn't ment to be
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jenni rose Carter
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Kevin Carney 23 September 2010

Nice write, the words flowed and you show wonderful emotion and humour. Enjoyed reading it. Nice job.

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