Thursday, December 3, 2009

Fire Comments

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Deep down Im always heated
Within my fiery soul
Trying to overcome this flamin road
Why cant I be normal why cant I be cold
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Daniel Mason
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Daniel Mason 07 December 2009

I know baby oh and you trust me toooo. (dont you) ? And thank you both for ur comments

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Nickey Mason 04 December 2009

same here da day wen ma daddy went to jail wen he got out he went back n kept going back n i began 2 get to heated n frustrated bcuz i neva get to c him ne more. n wen he left i changed i hated the police n i hated him fa keep leaving but now wen i talk 2 him he tells me how much he misses me n try 2 bring ma grades back up n just calm down a lil bit but i cant cuz i been through so much n ma life n he doesnt even know about it but yet he is the only man i trust n dis world so yea i feel you babiie

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Swati Palta 03 December 2009

there is real fire here i like your poem its awfully good

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Daniel Mason

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